All Comments on 'Mia Mine Ch. 06'

by cliptoe

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Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594almost 10 years ago
Nicely done, again!

Great cliff hanger! Well done as always. Now you've made me anxious for the next chapter and I waited so long for this one! I really like the characters you've created, I'd like to know more about them. I hope you're able to weave that into your lovely plot. Can't wait...as usual!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

oh yes more chapters to where mia gets matters cleared up and her so call father goes to jail for extortion mia has decided to stay with david i see where you took make last suggestion to where she has decided to stay with david

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgalmost 10 years ago
Its A Tremendously Calming Mix...

...Of beautifully erotic love scenes and charming intermezzos. Now I see the most common, and the most awful of TG problems rearing its ugly head, family issues. Great story... so very lovely to read. Thanks for sharing it with us... Cheers! --- Josie

sober71sober71about 8 years ago
Just brilliant

I adore this story, that is well written with the right amount of erotica.

On to part 7. Cliptoe I love you.

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