All Comments on 'Mia Mine Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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What a wonderful and romantic story beautifully written and told all of the characters are wonderfully portrayed and David and Jonathan sound so wonderful why are not all men like this and more understanding to the transgender community please carry on with this story as I have followed it from the 1st chapter as I want to know what happens to Mia and David and where the story will lead with Mindy and Jonathan

Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594over 9 years ago
So much love.

i really do enjoy your storytelling. Wonderful characters & wonderful plot line. Love the introduction of Mindy and Jonathan, it gives the story more depth and spurs the imagination about where you will go next. That's what makes good storytelling captivating and from other comments on this story as well as earlier chapters, you have captured our attention, and our hearts.

Wouldn't it be nice if such an organization as you've described actually existed. Wouldn't it be nice if men in this world, as another reader commented, were as understanding as Jonathan and David. (Sigh). Wouldn't it be nice.

Keep going...anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 9 years ago
What Can I Say Cliptoe...

...besides 'you are my hero'! If only... but unfortunately the world I knew resembled Mindy's much more than Mia's for quite awhile. I gradually pulled out of it, but the Mindys of today still have no better acceptance by society really than they had when the word transgendered was created. Stories like yours are wonderful islands of hope in an ocean of pain. Your writing is incredible as usual, the characters are striking and memorable... and real. Thank you SO much for sharing it, and it always leaves me wanting more, guess I'm a cliptoe addict now :) Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

keep going and i read where mia is thinking about srs thank you for using my suggestion

RebeccaCherieRebeccaCherieover 9 years ago
Gorgeous.

I too wish that men were this sensitive to us !!! Beautiful. Xxxxx

griffin57griffin57over 9 years ago
Hope you have..

The next chapter in the near future; like yesterday. This is fabuloso! 3 pgs went by in nothing flat. Great job Cliptoe.

usmclassusmclassalmost 6 years ago
Costing me a lot of sleep.

The 1st 2 chapters reminded me so much of my true love and I first coming together. But this is my ....4th? ... time to revisit Mia. I wish this was in hard copy. Books are some of my best friends. I often read them....and rebuy them...over and over. But a few...Nora Roberts, Lynsay Sands, Louis L' Amour have individual titles that I *know * I will have to see again. I have a bookcase for my "Keeper" stories. ... this would definitely rate a place among them.

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