All Comments on 'Michael & Jason Ch. 02'

I'm sorry for the things you've been going through and with the loss of your father. Life isn't always easy and HEA's are really hard to come by. They say you should write what you know and the emotion you are going through is vividly reflected in this chapter. It is full of raw emotion and the conflict to have what you want and what is best for you certainly is evident here. Not sure how you can reconcile the two between Michael and Jason. Either Michael is with Jason loving in secret or loving openingly with Kenny and pining for Jason. A sure fire no win situation.

Im liking jason and michael together but i hate the fact that he still wants kenny hes sad that jason is going away and not to bothered that kenny is away yes u can love 2 people but u cant have both i really would like him to realise that it is jason he wants

I love Jason's decision to stay away from Michael to find himself..... Its a tough decision to make but it is clearly necessary. Love the expression of emotions in this chapter it gr8.... Hope the next chapter will be coming soon. And sorry for your Dad

Two great boys, love that is perhaps deeper than anyone could imagine, unless one was in that same situation. Jason making the right decision. Michael needs to hang on to Kenny. Jason needs to "find himself ". Can't wait to see how you weave this plot! Good job! More, please.

I can't believe this unbelievably great story. I could feel every heartbreaking emotion. I laughed. I cried. I can't wait to read the rest. Very well done!

Just read the 2 parts back to back and even tho this is not my usual subject matter it was so well written and so emotional that it gripped my attention from the 1st paragraph, and part 2 had me in tears.

So sorry to hear about your dad I lost mine around the same and I still miss him.

I hope you write another chapter for Michael & Jason but it's been a while so I won't hold my breath but out of sheer curiosity I'd like to know what happens next and to read some more of your beautiful writing. Thanks for a cracking read

I’m sorry for your loss! You are very talented! I loved this story. I hope Jason gets his happy ending!