All Comments on 'Michael Takes Care of Me...'

by Nereida

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great hang line

Is page 2 coming? This looks the intro to a wonderful story. However, a prequel might be in order to explain why our lovely lady needed an on-line lover... such as a high rising star who wasn't there for her womanly needs, like talking and cuddling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
short but sweet

Nice story, but a bit to short, althought the details were there. This needs tO be continued, maybe even have a part were it is her renemberomg their chats on-line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
poetic

though short,the contents are really poetic and have the strength to connect souls....

welcome part 2

Batch252Batch252over 13 years ago

You write well. Change some of your poems into stories.

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