All Comments on 'Michelle's Story Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sick

is all you can say

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Gay

Gay black man

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

More! I personally want to see if she will be able to get out of this situation and get back to her husband or not.

Wait_and_BleedWait_and_Bleedover 11 years ago
Nice

Very hot! I want more and want to see what happens next :)

HardFeltHardFeltabout 11 years ago
Oh my ....

Yep a unbiased analytical erotic story. Wimp white little dicked hubby lost in Africa. White wife totally at the disposal of Black men, Black kids, Black women oh and I almost forgot Lesbians, Black Lesbians. Yep that's the definition of Black power: Black masters white slaves. Wonder why history doesn't bear that out? Oh I forgot, Africa is a major world economic power. Every body in the village of thatched Black power center is at attention; there's one hut, two hut, three hut's, four hut's, sorry I got carried away with all the huts! Africa doesn't need any of those fancy American things, they will make out with (or in) all the huts, besides who needs electricity anyway!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great

Fantastic chapters hope to see more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please!

I hope you can continue your story. We need to know if Michelle return to her husband. Please more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

this needs a finishing chapter does she stay and truelly become a whore or leave with hubby and baby inside her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tedious

Overdrawn. Predictable. Only scanned the last boring chapter.

Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

your story and your ending stink one great big shit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More

Michelle needs to stay in Africa and become a high class whore for Sarge her husband can never satisfy her again if he ever did

tjoe2310tjoe2310over 3 years ago
Wonderful

I love your stories! Just perfect!!

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