All Comments on 'Mid Life Crisis Book 01'

But no one in their right mind would leave, Thanks.

...definitely too long to read in one go. I think you must have got tired as you wrote, because the spelling and grammar got worse and worse. Please get an editor if you're going on to Book 2.

I agree with the first comment, though - why on earth would he leave?

I agree ... a lot to read for one sitting ... but there's a lot to come back for. Style, theme and presentation kept my interest at a high level of interest looking forward to fever pitch soon to appear. I enjoyed the story line interjected with periods of reality; meaning not every reader expects 24/7 sex ... some people really do have a life. What a feature? Experiences a reader can believe!

I enjoyed reading this story but the ending was not satisfying. I hope there is a continuation or a sequel, or something. Good writing, enjoyable fantasy.

kinky sex I liked the country pub setting it seemed very realistic. Nothing wrong with teen cheerleaders (thanks Eldridge) but its good to have a classic pub landlady fantasy now and again for contrast. If only there were more like Mary. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

I can't stop reading it. Well done

What kid of a world do we live in, are there things that you want to do tomorrow? If you start something at least end it.

How I wish I could have met a Mary or a Catherine when I had mine!

Fabulous story - exploring so many of my fantasies. - and very well written and totally erotic. Thanks so much for sharing

I think people in the UK are very lucky to actually have places like Mary's. ( Atleast i think they still do .)

I loved the honesty of Mary and Charlie. You so captured real human emotions in them as well as Catherine.

For me, Mary was the overall Star of the story ! And such a wonderful story it was.

I was shocked at the end with Charlie leaving, though it did leave an opening for a continuing story with him returning to Mary and the pub.

I was surprised at the number of grammatical errors. A good slow proof reading would have caught many or all of them.

This story has the potential to be made into a great adult rated movie !