All Comments on 'Midlife Correction Ch. 03'

Damn, this is good work. Luxurious is the best word I think.

I do love watching the way Julia is changing under Miles tutelage. And you describe it so well.

Nice work.

sickos

Dr. M. This is progressing nicely. Thanks for a wonderful tale. Looking forward to reading more about them.

i really enjoy the build of this story,slow and steady,with many details.i love both POV's,would like more of his.it's that inside glimpse of other's that allows me,a watchers,to experience life.she could be any woman(flawless body,grrr),who's always done the"right"things.i admire her guts for acting on her desires,making that midlife correction.is this possible? G

I've read most of your stories, and have not left feedback. Your mastery of language and your ability to build visceral sexual tension are remarkable and praiseworthy. My wife has submissive traits and I intend to read her this story as she lies, bound on our marital bed. Thank you for your passion and your writing. I will leave feedback faithfully for you and the other writers on Literotica whose work brings so much heat to my blood. – pcman

I've read most of your stories, and have not left feedback. Your mastery of language and your ability to build visceral sexual tension are remarkable and praiseworthy. My wife has submissive traits and I intend to read her this story as she lies, bound on our marital bed. Thank you for your passion and your writing. I will leave feedback faithfully for you and the other writers on Literotica whose work brings so much heat to my blood. – pcman

It's strange I've never commented to you before but it was your stories that got me really hooked on Literotica. I'd read the odd stories, but then when I came across yours, with such great use of language and wonderful sexual tension (not to mention that they're along the lines of my fantasies) that I now find myself spending far too much time reading many others.

The Midlife Correction is again classic Dr Mabeues, thanks.

The power of Miles' possession of Julia is the power of this writer over his audience. That power is deep, psychologically complex, and richly erotic. Julia's own power over Miles is equally compelling, though it is, at present, beyond her understanding. This writing is remarkable. I'm more grateful than ever to the person who led me to your work and encouraged me to read it. Thank you.

Brilliant story, beautifully written!

Another of your glorious, insightful probings into mutual submission. Yes, mutual. Each must submit to the power of the other in order to achieve the frission. Each must submit, to achieve the one hundred percent that the partnership requires.

Thank you for all your work.

Speechless with admiration. What extraordinary writing and incredible insights. This is testament to your power as a writer - your best ever. Thank you.

Incredible gift-your insight into the fascinating world of BDSM..

I have never written these words about another submission. This series left me wet and unfulfilled. You make me want this. You make me want to explore this world, and for that, I humbly thank you.

She stands at the shore of so much passion and fulfillment, but fears what it will mean if people notice her wet toes.

What is Miles to do? If he pursues her, she will flee. If he leaves her alone, she will regress into the barren propriety of the past seven years. Or worse, accept the conventional mediocrity of her old high school admirer.

How can Miles confer courage to put Julia's fears to rest? What could make her dare to be something different than she thought she was? She seems to choose the safety of daydreams and a life unlived. What a tragedy.

Its one of the best on this site.

This has the passion and emotion that a woman such as myself is seeking in the lifestyle... like your other fans, I do hope you will continue this story... it is incomplete as it is... please submit further installments and put us out of our misery!!

The pace is rapid and yet the process is true. Thank you for presenting well developed characters and story. Great writing!

This is how an introduction to submission should proceed, with all her emotional reactions laid out.... Awesome understanding of the process.