All Comments on 'Midnight Assaults'

loved it all the way through, it had me captivated untill the last full stop. could have sped up to the moment of full climaxing at the end, and made that last bit more detailed and longer, but other than that, amazing and a great read 👌👌

Thank you for the feedback i am glad that you enjoyed the story and since it's only my second one i appreciate the suggestions you have made.

Not sure if English is your native language but I am not sure written English is. Please get an editor or a new one -- so many little things (strange use of words, sentence structure, etc.) kept distracting me from what could have been a good read. Little things drive me away.

You are right english is not my mother tongue, sorry.

Really good story, got me quite frisky