All Comments on 'Midnight Hunting'

Good story! Wouldn't be surprised if things like that really happen.

Even an idiot like Josh realizes what a cluster fuck this deal is and goes to the cops. NOBODY is that stupid.

Your plot moved smoothly and quickly. I liked that Josh and Claire got away. I liked it that they didn't eventually embrace their slavery and enjoy it. So many stories have that theme. Would have really liked it if the sex slavers had been caught by police.

A short story, with a beginning, middle and satisfactory end; so rare! I enjoyed this story as the contents appealed greatly to my personal kinks. It was very well written, the characters, well drawn, easily visualised and hot as hell.

From this I look forward to reading your other submissions

A very good idea (I was on the mood for giving you 5 stars), with a very too simple conclusion.

So I don't know ... 3 stars, for the moment.

Try another ending and you could start a series from here

But I don't like slave stories, cruelty, D/s, any of that stuff. If it is your style I will not condemn it but I definitely do not like it. Thank you, author, for writing.