All Comments on 'Midnight Tryst'

This was a very good story. I would like to read more.

WOW, so arousing and very HOT. His sister is quite the controller but then she rewards him, cumming on him and then his cumming on her and in her mouth ......... Hopefully, she'll let him do more as she sounds like being very horny. Good story and cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

Anna has good ideas but needs to be more in control. Rewards should be given only after demonstrated obedience and good performance.

Very good story so far, excellent for a quick wank. I really hope there are future chapters of this very hot story.

"I should probably introduce myself, my name is Anna"

No, you shouldn't. Describing yourself is one thing. Describing your brother as well. But if the naems don't come naturally you've done it wrong. You identify yourself well when you realize the light is on. that works, or your brother can say, "Anna when you walk in. Don't overdo the set-up. let it flow naturally. Do you wake up in the morning and say, "I'm Anna"? No, someone identifies you later.

Good story just keep a focus. I'll look for more.

continue please

...then discovered the writer was a bloke.

Very good short story. I would enjoy reading a continuation; maybe with a little exhibitionism outdoors or in a public area.

I really like this story. The spanking really made it for me.

a gay BBW who despises men.....

Interesting premise.

But the mutual masturbation starts too quickly. And it zooms ahead to fast.

Needs to be slower. Needs more details. Needs more conversation about what thuns them on -- with details, not just "sex".

She showh him her pussy. Fine. Shaved? Hairy? Trimmed? Manicured?

Three stars.