All Comments on 'Midsummer Bride Pt. 02'

i realy did enjoy most of the story. but that ending just left me with a flat feeling. it felt rushed and unfinished...trs

Thank you for finishing the story. I understand the pull of time on projects.

While this story could have gone on and on an I would have gladly waited for each chapter, I appreciate that you did finish it.

I had to stop reading it because the policeman just felt wrong. In the UK, our police aren’t routinely armed. The only ones who can carry guns are specialist firearms officers and their weapons are stored securely at the police station unless said officers are on duty.

We are not America and it is not normal for anyone to carry firearms and it’s definitely not normal to expect guns to be stored at home.