by whatnow221
From an enjoyable and 'credible' Ch 01 to a totally unbelievable Ch 02. I soon lost interest and never actually finished it. Sorry.
It is too bad "SouthLondoner" did not appreciate this story....after all, it is a story, it is fantasy, which is why we are reading the story(is)!!
**5**Stars, ready to read Chapter 3 now!