All Comments on 'Might Have Been Ch. 01'

That ending, was a swift uppercut and the hardest kick to the balls one can imagine all rolled into one... very good.

Very very good story.

I couldn't get pass the second page... :(

5*

I really like your writing style, shows a depth and talent few on this site have, well done!

On now to read the next chapter!

I read this first story in your series after reading the last story last night. Love your style, your vocabulary, your imagination, as well as your willingness to share it! Great stuff; please keep it up.

This was a great read! Your writing style is very professional for this site, which really managed to draw me in. If I had to guess I'd say you've been writing regular fiction for quite a while before you wrote this. I really appreciate all the cultural and scientific references too.

The sex scene wasn't really anything out of the ordinary, I'd say it's about the same level as most stories on this site. The rest of your story was far beyond me expectations though! Still, the sex scene was welcome and didn't disappoint.

Now I'm off to binge-read the rest of this story!

But to be fair, I'm not really liking the main character. He seems like a bit of a self absorbed prick. When he's talking about his life and lack of love with Tasha, I can understand but at the same time, it's just so whiny. The fact that he made a 'promise to never leave her' at the detriment of his own happiness is his own fault. Then he reminisced about his youth and he seemed just a little elitist and disregarding of other people around him. Finally when he regresses to his 'date' with Amy he just seems like he's doing her a favour, being her romantic ideal and assuming that she is a blushing virgin even when there are multiple cues to the contrary. I hope there is some character growth and self-realisation coming soon or it's going to be slow going.

That was amazing. Clearly you are a brainiac and I love how he was ultimately hoisted on his own petard.

Oh I enjoyed this so much. Not as sexy as some stories, but that may just be because it didn't play into any of my specific fetishes. But it was so well written! Maybe one of the best I've read on this site. I didn't get off to it, but I will definitely read the rest of the series. Might buy a physical copy too. This is the only erotica I've read and enjoyed I wouldn't be embarrassed to have on the shelves. If it wasn't on this site, I'd recommend it to friends. 5 stars