All Comments on 'Might Have Been Ch. 05'

I love it and you firm grasp and use of language. You work stands head and shoulders above the rest. I wish I could rate it with a sixth star .

Just wow! And thanks!

..is in the mirror. I am delighted at your ability to keep your motive hidden until the last few lines of your stories. I hope you get enough encouragement from we readers to continue your gifted work. Thanks again for sharing.

You are a master of your art! It's a pleasure to be sent to the dictionary so often only to find the new word so appropriately used, that its meaning was obvious. Too often, stories on this site appear to be written by contributors who cannot claim English as their first language. You've demonstrated the importance of execution in playing the score. Not to mention it's a damn good yarn!

Sometimes you can find beauty in misery.

Thank you.

Better and better. I thought the whole That Bitch Courtney dance and The Toothsome Twosome learning experience would be the high of this story. Nope. The Ukrainian Star Slut rocketed this tale beyond the beyond. Wow.

Chandleresque but with porn instead of detectives. Love your expressions. Observations. Plus the physics. I hope you are writing in other genres. I will look at your selfie page thanks!

in the grip of our hopes and genitals.

It began in the last chapter, but the theme of sacrificing for love vs. sacrificing love is really taking root here. I’m hoping Lance realizes he’s been a selfish idiot and gives up on Tasha. I found this chapter less hot than the previous two, but probably cause Loving Wives isn’t my thing. The descriptions were hot though. I kinda expected the teacher to be an alright guy given Lance’s track record of misunderstanding people, but even a broken clock is right twice a day.