All Comments on 'Mike & Savy Ch. 01'

by JustAnotherMarylander

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent start!

Great sweet sexy buildup! I'm really looking forward to chapter 2!

kjohns2001kjohns2001over 9 years ago
I have to wait for more? No way!

I loved this. Sadly though it looks like I'm going to have to wait for the series to continue. I can only hope that the rest of the story lives up to the standard set by the first part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful

It's a wonderful story. I also love the way you are slowly building a sweet relationship with them. It's so sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter so please don't wait to long to post it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Waiting Impatiently For The Next Installment

How mean to make us wait for the next installment... LoL Come on now, get to it!! Loved the story so far and will be checking daily for the next one, so please... don't make me wait too long. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mike and savy

Sir or mama I Accidentally hit the report button to your story but I do like it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
4/5

Usually I give stories threes. I appreciate build up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Sounded like he was secretly in love with her with the way he talked about her. Cute.

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 9 years ago
Good story

This is definitely a good well written story. I enjoyed the transition from when Mike was 8 years old taking him through college, out into the world.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
Because of the category, (Incest/taboo) would someone please clarify for me

the sibling(?) relationship between Mike and Savy?

Adopted?

Philippine?

Dark brown hair?

Sudden adoption at four years old?

Belle2327Belle2327over 8 years ago
To Rightbank

Keep reading you will find out. Best series on the site I'm telling u.

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