by carlyle2
Yes, I am a women and all I really want IS a small penis.
I don't know why a woman could not find a small penis erotic. Seems reasonable, as men enjoy both thin, small women and large women.
Don't be brainwashed by the media and what it tells you people should look like or enjoy.
That said, take a little more time to develop your characters and their motivations. I prefer a little more realism as well.
...because we all know what women really want from a guy is a tiny cock.
On the other hand, makes a change from the usual bunch of John Holmes impersonators in these stories.
I hope this goes somewhere. It's a good start although I would have developed the plot a bit more for part one.