by kidboise
Very well written and they are instantly characters you want to know more about. Can't wait to read more of this story!
I so want to see what's coming next - I'm cheering for these two guys. Wish I was there ... wish I was Chickadee *blush*
What an excellent writer you are. I also love the story and hope you won't keep us waiting for too long. Looking forward to it.
Two lonely souls drawn to each other, in need of each other! Love it and hope you'll continue to develop it! You have an amazing gift for writing - thanks for sharing it with us!
I very much enjoy your writing, both in style and substance. I look forward to the next installment and to where this all goes.
I was pleasantly surprised to see the comment from David Patrick, also one of my favorite writers. I'm really liking this story and anxious to see where it goes.
Just hugging and these guys got aroused, I wonder what a kiss would do? Looking forward to CH 03.
Are we in love, or lust? Wow, what a great friendship developing.