All Comments on 'Mili's Amateur Modeling Takes Off Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent chapter 2!

One suggestion: nakadashi = come inside. This pull out and squirt is no fun. The guys fucking her should come inside her and we get to see pussy and ass gape shots, with sperm dripping out of her freshly fucked pussy and ass. That would be especially important in a gangbang video. Such a video could include multiple DP, 3P, and lots of ass-to-mouth. Back to the video shot in this chapter, if it was a revenge fuck he should have come inside her and made her do ass-to-mouth multiple times. Thank you for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
This is truly unbelievable!

No Indian parents would allow their son to go to college for Journalism!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
slow down

For all it build up

It's sex is faster than jackrabbits doin it

AmbulAmbul2 months ago

Wow, another incredibly erotic chapter. Well written, well plotted, the sex was very clearly described.

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