All Comments on 'Milk Barn Horror Pt. 02'

I'm loving the storyline, just find the pacing a little too slow and I wish there was more to read

Loved the second part. You attention to detail really paints a picture, "The gown picks that moment to slither from her body. The fabric hangs to the floor like a bizarre necktie. ". That line was awesome! The two main characters are just the type of girls I like. Play up the unattractive appearance of the men who take advantage of them and don't rush into the sex scenes because seeing them in compromising situations is HOT. Keep it up.