All Comments on 'Milk from My Neighbor Ch. 01'

Really nice and well done. So nice to read a story that could be about real people.

Thanks a lot...

Very Good and touching story well done

A really good start and I want the story to go on. I love the way the two of them get together. I love a good love story. Love it. Bob

well done... keep it cooming, make it hotter.

Just love the way you write, and the sweet, sensual build up to their love making. So much better than the usual raw stuff this site produces. A real gem!

Great story. Very realistic, positive, believable, and very erotic. Looking forward to more of your work.

this was a great story, i like the detail you put in it.

Such a sweet tale Fernie...and incredibly erotic

I thought the first 3/4 or so were great, and the sex scene was well written but felt a little rushed to me. I would have liked to see more build up to it ... but all in all a very good story.

OMG MORE MORE MORE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY

Although I read the stories for the sex. It was great to see the story had a nice plot, and had substance. It didn't rush, but didn't take forever to get to the sex. great story, you have talent. keep it going.

You have a nice way of building up interest in the characters and setting the mood! Loved your story

Good tension building with her talking about being widowed, and a great sex scene

This was well done. Loved the way you developed the relationship. And...the sex was hot! Thanks!

Very warm, both erotic (the milk fetish is a favorite of mine) and kind, not something easy to do. There are places where you hop from one character to the other's point of view, which can be disconcerting to the reader, but in this case you do it well and it would take something away from the story if the internal feelings of your characters weren't known. Very hot, very well done. Thanks.

Kudos to you. You delivered a sweet, sexy and pretty hot story. But just one chapter?

Oh wait... I see a 2nd one.

Well done. Thanks for sharing :)

Please write again.

Very romantic and sensual story.

I also want to be her husband

Was longing for a good plot for a while... great story by the way.... Want some more interesting one like this one...

Great story ... it is the fantasy of my life in written form !!

Very nice....especially for your first story! My only suggestion would be to find an interest or activity that they both share...It will add to the believability of the quick development of the relationship. Thank you. Great story.