by InYourDreams
..getting better and better. Very erotic and well written. Excellent as building the suspense.
It only seems to get better after each installment. I want to find out how she feels after they start to milk her. One thing this latest chapter told us is that her breasts would get bigger and firmer with her time on the farm..... Bigger tits for her hubby's machine, hmmm ??????
have ginny marked as a proper sow, brand her ass, pierce her nose with a ring, and tattoo each tit with numbers
The immediate shift in her status, once she signs the papers, blew me away. I know what it is to torture oneself, second-guessing the degradation one truly needs and desires, because one is fearful of change, particularly loss of others' respect and one's position in society. And so I CAME when I read the words "The SOW needs to get undressed."
Thank you, Sir, for this WONDERFUL D/s fantasy world.
This is the hottest story idea I've read in a long time, and you, Sir, know the mind of the submissive and write eloquently of it.
Well written, your story develops niceley; as I suppose will Ginnys udders.
In this section, perhaps add specific description of Ginny removing her wedding rings and dropping them into the storage box, along with her thoughts and emotions.
The coup -de-gras of this story is the anticipation followed by Ginny's realisation that she has lost control of her life & that she is to a great extent at the mercy of these people. Ben must be wondering what he has let Ginny in for