by tomthumper
Dynamite story. You need t keep this going. Chapter 2 should highlight the four of them getting together for a "milking." BTW, to readers who have never savored mother's milk, it's a blast!
This sounds like it was written by the author of a bad pulp fiction novel, or even worse, a romance novelist gone bad. I especially liked this line:
" `Not while she's in the shower.' Steve could feel the veins in his head pulsing with excitement."
You know, a little aspirin will help take care of that headache.