All Comments on 'Minabi's Gift (BWC1)'

The action was very hot! Very well done! Though killing her 'toys' is a very Sith thing to do, she could have mindwiped them, or enslaved them...

Maybe its my peeve against a hentai cliche (demons raping girls to death) or or thinking long-term plotting (Palpatine)...

I'm confused... which one were the Jedi? I didn't see anyone acting like one. Oo

The main chara was more like an assassin or Sith. (Or rival Sith. If we go back to before Bane and before the cult of Darklords training him, it was pretty common for Sith's to in-fight after all. The Dark Side is not exactly known for it's nice co-opperation skills.)

Other than that, good story. ^_^