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I hope you all enjoyed Mind Games! And I managed to finish my halloween story just in time for November! Ha! Well, anyway, normal endfold stuff...here!

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That was a great story! I was getting DOOM vibes early on, but getting it confirmed is pretty neat.

You are a very skilled writer and I really enjoy your work. Keep it up!

This was amazing. The character developement, the plot. Everything you don't come to expect from something written on literotica... which is probably the one issue with this story: it lacks sex.

Other than that, 5 stars.

It doesn't LACK sex!

It just has slightly less than some other stories!

They should have hired you for the story line. This was awesome! I love all of your stories

^_^

So, correct me if I’m wrong, but it seems to be this story was borne out of love for both the Prey and Doom series. The first part I realized early on, and the second as soon as you mentioned the UAC and the portal (though I got a big hint when you mentioned tearing and ripping in an earlier chapter). As a big-time fan of these two, I approve. I read the last segment while istening to “At Doom’s Gate,” and it really couldn’t have been more perfect. Definitely up there in the stories on this site. Thumbs up.

I'm also a huge fan of all 0415 games - System Shock, System Shock 2, even the Dishonored series.

If doom eternal was this it would have been actually good. This was a great thing to come across randomly and a super enjoyable read. Now I want to play Prey