All Comments on 'Mind Writing Pt. 08: Emerald'

Love it as always

Excellent, thank you

A very yummy addition to this story. I'm looking forward to more of it! Thank you!

Phenomenal story. Hope for more bi scenes in the future.

5 stars. Please never stop this story its amazing

Just discovered this series. Loving it. Please, please do continue.

Hannah lives with her mom and grandma. You've never mentioned a sister before, though you haven't said only child either.

It would be so useful if you learned to link your stories in a series

I’m enjoying the series.

I initially found that the way things ended with Shona and Ali to be sad, that Jamies actions were all a bit naïve but then I remembered that the character is only 18 and still learning that just because he finds the idea of having a bunch of women as a harem of sex pets it doesn’t mean that a mother wants that for her or her daughter

I’d still like him in some way to mend the bridges without them all fucking again but I guess the story has now moved beyond that

I find it intriguing that Jamie appears incapable of learning from his mistakes.

He sways between being compassionate to callously cold in nature.

Couple this to his inability in some instances of undoing problems he created and yet in other situations mentioning he could not undo problems he had created - WTF?

Shona and Ali a good example. He did not have to wipe memories, all he would have needed to do is tone down Shona's emotions, but for some vague reasoning he chose against that avenue.

Still, yes it's fiction, but, I personally, felt sad for the outcome with Shona and Ali.