by Kripto
Reading this story is like watching a summer block buster movie. I'm loving it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Maybe a sentence or two from the point of view of the girls when Adam and Dan disconnect from them? Do they feel like they just had sex? Seeing their confusion would be amazing!
Good fun will some impending threats to spice things up. They are going to have to get pretty creative to get out of this.
Keep up the great work!