All Comments on 'Mine'

There is a Graphics story that's similar . A Witch puts a spell on him.

I like yours better.

A 5 from me.

i must say that was truly enjoyable, the metamorphis was quite thorough and the erotic side wasnt full on but was fair. Lots of elements im enjoying reading at the moment, well done you!

Were the getting lost, bad driving, terrible jealousy, possessiveness, ditzyness, and inability to focus all part of Derek becoming female? Like they were biological changes?

Why stop right before the consummation? I'm frustrated. Give us another 2 pages of sexual and emotional discovery.

I wanted to see the two of them have sex while he was female. :(

Loved it.