by *Eve*
what else is there to say except please, please continue with this and SOON =)
don't leave us hanging very long! this is a great story...but are jake's intentions honorable or did he send the guy to rough up narissa? i'll keep an eye out for the next installment! great work!
this is really good so far, though i think the age gap is too big, 12-15 years wouldb have been fine.