by *Eve*
girl he is twisted please don't have him to obsessed that he would kill her.
I don't know how this will all end, but can't wait to find out!! Again great job!
this story seemed pretty interesting at first but now the twist is downright disturbing, this seems like rape and kidnapping and Jakes seems like a psycho
jake is way creepy but there's still something compelling about him...he's still sexy. i really like your creation of him as a villain/lover.
I have to agree with Anon from USA. This is getting slightly disturbing for romance...