All Comments on 'Minoan Vacation Ch. 01'

Just 2* because we can see were this is going...The insistence about she didn't want to get pregnant, shows where the story is going...I hope I'm wrong and that she doesn't forget that she is above all a mother...All the wrong she does will fall over the head of their children!!!

Poorly written drivel with cardboard characters acting in predictably inane ways. Lacking any type of cleverness or originality this simply wasn't worth the time spent reading it. No stars.

Your name alone is offensive, I'm sure the story is even worse. I'll pass. Thanks for the warning.

Well I enjoyed reading it. Got a bit aroused but mainly just made me want to go on holiday! Look forward to reading more :)

Unlike some of your previous commentators, I enjoyed this. Next chapter please!

What a waste of writing talent. Are you really this empty of wit and imagination? This story is so obvious, humiliating, and base. Congratulations, I'm sure all the positive influential people in your life would be so proud of this effort.

Have the whore try the Minotaur. He, like your story, is a lot of bull.