All Comments on 'Minute by Minute Ch. 02'

This story freaking rocks! It is so awesome and has me anxiously salivating for more!

What a great story, looking forward to seeing more!

wow, it continues to be a great story. The characters are captivating. I can't wait to see the worlds you've created. I do hope Noah wakes up. I am also wondering why he feels a connection like he does to the planet that they come from. What is the name of the one who wants to be his mate? I am only sad that he won't see Sam again and clearly Lucas and Chloe love him too. But, other than Sam they didin't help him it seems. How sad. Hope the father has an unfortunate accident. Actually I loved the claws into his chest thing. Too bad they didn't go in and rip his lungs out :) Only after ripping his genitals off! :)

Please update soon!

So far this story is amazing. It is so creative and the chracters are very realistic. I hope Noah isn't seperated from his siblings. Thanks for the great work; I look forward to more.

Nice piece of writing.

This is one of the best stories I have read here in awhile.

I was so worried that you wouldn't continue but you did! Thank you. I love this story! Yess, the Noah was saved :)

Captivating, imaginative story. I like it.

I hope Noah isn't separated from his caring siblings forever. Paul in the first chapter seemed just like the father and should get what's coming to him and never get to see Noah again.

I am so curious about how things came to be as they are in that family, and about Sam's powers. Please continue soon.

Stumbled on your story and even though I don't really like sci-fi you have me captured wanting for more! Great work!

I've been a sci fi fan for a while now and I loved this story. I look forward to reading more.