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by PierceAaron61

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
wow

How the hell did i miss this story? soo good.

themegahomothemegahomoover 12 years ago
Good story but

There are too Many cliches that I don't agree with

-bbws don't they they're beautiful... Huh? What's the first acronym in bbw? Beautiful.

-women who cry due to a guy coming on to them... Happens way to often...

Other then that your male character plays the witty funny part extremely well... Good work

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