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All Comments on 'Miranda and Geraldine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE IT

WOW!! Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter, especially love the humiliation

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
know your characters

or at least keep them straight. multiple instances where the names were switched. sloppy. took away much of the enjoyment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thank you for writing!

This was a very hot, excellent story. Thanks for writing it! I think my favorite part, one that you might want to play up more, is Geraldine's humiliation at being compared to her old dog. The cage and the tag are nice, but I think that it would be sexy if you emphasized more what it did to Geraldine.

zena99zena99over 12 years ago
Thank you

Love it! Love it! Love it! Great story. I love the degradation and humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I really love this story, cant wait to see what happens at the mall

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