All Comments on 'Miranda Gets It All Ch. 02'

I would recommend using quotation marks for dialogue, and perhaps an editor for proofreading.

I didnt realize we were in 6th grade english class. I thought this was a sex story site.

Oh Boy! Is Miranda ever going to get so fucked, by her loving Daddy's huge cock too!

Can't wait for the next chapter. He should fuck her senseless with the black guys cum still all over her face.

Thanks for the tip. I'm gonna do just that.

Wow "daddy" u r so "bad", hurry up with the next story, so I can have another shower. (I think I will need a cold one.

Looking forward to the next one

You have no idea just how bad "Daddy" can be. It's all in the mind young lady. Have a nice shower.

Any particular reason why you decided not to use quotation marks?

Why shouldn't you use quotation marks because its a sex story website? I really liked this story but without the quotations its a little confusing. Are they talking or thinking? Just my opinion. Hope to read more chapters.

A third pat?

nothing is hotter than watching youre daughter being a slut

Hi I really love where this story could , and what you've done with it so far, but please check your grammar and spelling.

Keep writing though :)