All Comments on 'Miranda's Lust'

The story and the characters jump from one action to another without rhyme or reason. Provide enough of what they are thinking so the changes they make are seemingly sensible. Motivation, why something is done needs to be explained. Son starts acting like an ass, we don't know why. Tell us he all of a sudden is bothered by being socially inept. Then rethink the whole concept as high school is hell for socially inept teens. He would have been suffering for more than four years already. The premise is decent, not very believable, but most stories on Lit aren't. We read for the titalation, not for the stories great literary value.

Yea this story wasn't my idea, I was simply asked to write it for a fan. While what you said is true could it be better yes. Could I have gone into getter detail etc. etc. Yes, I could, however, what time I have is limited and I wanted to see how a short and sweet tale would handle.

Nothing interesting

I noticed that you like mother/son scenarios in which a mother ties and rapes her son and I must say that I like it a lot. There aren't many stories which cover that particular fantasy.

This story is a short and sweet and in my opinion, it didn't need much more. Other comments are being too hard on you, so no worries.

I love how the mother just gets what she wants, and it especially works if a son is acting like an asshole. It shows that he can act all tough but when he got bound and helpless, he wasn't so tough after all. Also, the part about 3 hour rape is great, too. I'm trying to imagine a hot mother (Ava Addams comes to mind judging by your description) riding her naked son so hard, playing with her hair, riding him reverse cowgirl style, sucking him to get him hard again, licking his whole body, and it goes on for 3 full hours. That is awesome!

Keep doing what you're doing because there is a lot potential. And don't give up on this mother/son femdom theme!

I liked Mom being the sexual aggressor, to the point of drugging and bondage. And I could see where a son could handle going without sex in high school but the frustration start to get to him in college.

This theme is seriously great .but the story could have been a bit longer

More like this ! ! !

They all give in so easily just a quick talk or some easy pussy and they jump right on it. But like I said maybe that just bothers me

I've comment before on another of your stories but I feel to comment again. I think their is some good stuff here but your stories seem like you're rushing them out. Given the speed at which you're posting new stories I feel that is the problem. If you were to take more time proof reading I feel your stories would see a major quality improvement, especially if you got an editor. I might also suggest taking more time to develop your character's acceptance of these taboo acts. The last one is not so big for a story like these one, but is a bigger element for stories like the abandoned son and the nordward family, since you're bringing deeper emotions into play.

This had the makings of a great story, with seduction between mom and son. it seemed like you were in a rush to get this published. Started off great, but fell flat.

hot to read about mother son fuck.

I don't see how his interest in music, as indicated by his choice of reading material, is any clue to his sexual orientation.

Quite a few moms have helped shy, timid, son become more confident. Many have found that a few "accidental" flashes and a helping hand are very effective.

rape story...

Great fucking story! I love how she just takes what she wants.

This is a great short, hot story!

What I would like to read is a minor edit you can write, and it would be in the part where Miranda starts fucking Jeffrey. I would like if you could add a few more paragraphs describing how exactly Miranda fucked him in those three hours.

I kind of agree with amachi, this story is nearly perfect in its own form but it lacks a few paragraphs of actual description of sex. Three hours is a long time, maybe just a little edit, soul71?

Well, when they get back to me I'll think about it when I get the edited version back.

I think that edit will add even more good stuff to this already nice and sexy story!

Have you decided yet will and when you'll edit it?

When my editor decides to edit it.

I had a great time reading this, it's like how I like my girls - short and sweet. :)

But yeah, I agree with the others - a nice addition on the desciption of the sex scene should be done. So, I don't know how fast your editor is but hope it'll be done rather sooner than later.

As soon as she finishes my two mewest stories she'll work on these old stories.

I came so hard reading this. Miranda is one hot, determined MILF. Thank you for this story!

You're welcome

Another great story. You really keep me busy reading.

I can't stop reading your stories. I'll admit that there are a few that don't look like I would like so I stay away from them but every one that I've read has been very enjoyable.

Racy and hot.

Sure wish my mom would give in to me instead of just teasing me by letting me watch her change clothes

This authors stories are very, very often… rapey, very, very rapey.

Awesome! Great sense of humour!