All Comments on 'MirrorLake Academy'

liked the story, but VERY hard to follow. it jumps back and forth between characters and i get lost quickly as to who is speaking or thinking. that really needs to be cleaned up, otherwise it has tremendous potential and i look forward to a new chapter.

I agree it was hard to follow and would be lots better if it was fixed up a bit. I enjoyed it even though it was a litle confusing