by Zundas
Doesnt seem like much of a 'punishment'. More of a reward than anything. Maybe she really hates fucking and cumming? If so, then, yes, great job. The little minx sure learned her lesson.
Decent writing in any case. I won't give a writing critique. Keep at it. Do some more.
Hi, the writer here.
In reference to the most recent comment by an anonymous person, the punishment was the face-facefucking and the spanking. I do agree though that I should have spent more time focusing on the punishment, almost done with the sequel and that is more intense with that aspect.
Thanks for the feedback so far.