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by Zundas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really good

I love the adoration yet cruel relationship you wrote about

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Doesnt seem like much of a 'punishment'. More of a reward than anything. Maybe she really hates fucking and cumming? If so, then, yes, great job. The little minx sure learned her lesson.

Decent writing in any case. I won't give a writing critique. Keep at it. Do some more.

ZundasZundasover 6 years agoAuthor

Hi, the writer here.

In reference to the most recent comment by an anonymous person, the punishment was the face-facefucking and the spanking. I do agree though that I should have spent more time focusing on the punishment, almost done with the sequel and that is more intense with that aspect.

Thanks for the feedback so far.

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