All Comments on 'Misguided Love'

Could not get past the first page, if I saw "errrr" one more time I was going to scream!

So everything you do and everything you say comes out perfectly, first time, does it?

I'm attempting to give an idea of semi-reluctant feelings; of not being sure of what one should do and of doubts......

Hence I'm sorry about the errrs, but they'll stay and they'll be back in future stories, thanks.

It was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Nice ending, a true love story.

Wow, that was and amazing story Chris. Loved everything about it. Nothing more I can say other than WOW!

Why did you refer their dicks as 'he' or 'its cumming'? I thought it was weird. But apart from that it was a good story.

My title says it all - I often refer to a penis as 'he' because that appendage is part of the person, not an item on its own.

One's penis is a really important thing, isn't it! So important that it shouldn't be just THE penis - it's MY penis - hence the importance I apply to the offending object.

I'm curious too as to why you should object to "it's cumming". Should I always say "I'm cumming" then? The 'it' in this case isn't the masculine penis - its the eruption of cum I'm referring to....which is far more anonymous.

Awesome build up that quickly became a rollercoaster ride of emotions! The length was certainly not an issue due to the enticing storyline and competitive characters!

I would have liked it if powers saved Jack after he's been gang bang painfully then dump him at a public hospital where the news would go round the country.

I'm really curious about how he got rich suddenly after 3 years.

welcome back

One hot erotic experience after another. The guy who says you tell a real rollercoaster of a story is right.