by soppingwetpanties
Oh, boy, what a fabulous story! Can't wait to find out what Miss Allison has in store for David.
Premise with potential.
But being pissed on or drinking it is a total turn off for me.
One star.
Hmmm... 50 questions on the survey to tick off? Two ticked off in this chapter, so maybe about another 24 chapters to look forward to? I can't wait! I think the story is excellent and I love your writing. Thank you.
Golden showers aren't really my thing, but wow, that's a sexy scene! I was hoping Allison and Meghan would get together soon.
Good premise.
But water sports are a real turn off.
Disappointing.
And, you wrote" "... Carrera marble tiles." It's CARRARA.
Two stars.