by Brie_de_Jour
I die such good story much love
Agree, such a great story. Would very much like to see more historical ones from you.
Just found this story and author. Will read all others. Bravo.
Please continue. At one point I wanted to shout with gladness at having found an author with your wonderful writing style. I will definitely be reading the rest of your work.
I am blown away. Your writing is of a totally professional quality. Character development spot on. Well done
For years I've been looking for erotic short stories that are well written and with historic themes. Finally I have found you! And as someone else wrote, the chracters seem so genuine. Please write more erotic short stores, or better yet, include them in a novel!
Having read several of your stories, I am stuck by your mastery of several elements. Some have been noted by others (setting, character, plot). I don't recall anyone mentioning your dialogue. Its tough to strike the balance between "sounding" period yet still having it flow as if spoken only yesterday. You not only manage that quite nicely, but it is also makes the characters seem naturally witty which is perhaps a greater accomplishment. The reader tends to forget they are reading a period piece because they are so entertained by your characters. Well done!
"Never!" .....stop writing.