All Comments on 'Miss Marie and the Local Oldies Bar'

Part 2 needs to include her viirgin ass

VERY WELL DONE !! NOW,.... PLEASE DO NOT KEEP US WAITING LONG FOR CHAPTER TWO. ALSO NOTE THAT MANY OLDER WOMEN DO NOT CARE FOR ANAL SEX SO IT IS REALLY YOUR DECISION ON HOW TO PROCEED WITH YOUR STORY. IN ANY EVENT I AM CERTAIN THAT IT WILL EXCEL. THANKS AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR FUTURE WRITING ENDEAVORS.

The few young guys like Jack that are into older women have found a good thing. Usually no drama and hot NSA sex..

The early ,"Does your husband have a gun?" question was a real turn-off for me.

...how his having a short, thin pens added ANYTHING to the story.

Au contraire, sweetie, the question about the gun was an integral part of the story. "Anti-gun crap" indeed! Whoever wrote that sounds like a grade A asshole. Let's have some more smokin' hot sex between these two...

I don't know if there are places like the 'oldies bar' but it sounds like a fun place (I'm an oldie myself). Jack's treatment of Marie is very considerate. Sounds like a good way to get the husband's attention too! Nice story and well written.

very well written and the subject was good between an older woman and a younger man. I'm older and really enjoy the older women stories. thank you