All Comments on 'Miss Phillips Takes Dictation 02'

For the second chapter. Please continue writing and sharing with us!

You need editorial assistance.

Loved this story. Very creative & has the "bones" to provide many more delightful, insightful chapters. Even these initial chapters could have been more fully " fleshed out". Hoping you will do so. Can't wait

Enjoyed both parts. Absolutely erotic. Needs a proper cast to play out the roles. Anyone creative would be overjoyed to fill in. Thanks.

I thank the three 'anonymice' for their comments.

anonymous "Miss Phillips"

I find your notion of 'casting' the story quite compelling. As the main criticism about my novels is that they read like screenplays I am pleased to imagine the casting couch sessions for Miss Phillips. Come to think of it: they are rather like parts one and two of this series.

anonymous "Wicked and Delicious"

Thanks. The qualities go together so well; the most delicious often the most wicked. Doesn't Master comment on Miss Phillips' tendency to be aroused and embarrassed at the same time? (I haven't read the stories for a while :)

Agree these chapters could do with more flesh; baring it in mind . . .

anonymous "Thank you"

Well, you've certainly made me contemplate continuing the saga. Seems to me there was an incident of Master taking Miss Phillips to buy a collar . . .

RapidResponder "Get some help."

Yep, the negative vote always is cast twice. American politics.