All Comments on 'Miss Villanueva'

I did enjoy the personal controversy going through Miss Villanueva's mind,,, the plot line gradually got a bit much for realism, as I fly a lot and have had the unfortunate experience of "higher screening" mind you not to the physical extent,,,, so maybe that is why the realism is not there,,,,

Welcome to Literotica. I enjoyed this story very much and would love to see you make a series out of it. Eventually, of course, these guys have to be caught and somehow humiliated themselves, but in the meantime, I'd love to read more about what they do. You descriptions of Maria's thoughts and feelings during the search were spot on. Thank you for posting this...

I love this type of story. The more humiliating the better. Mothers & wives especially.

Please make this into a series, you are a very talented writer.

A very well-written, if somewhat dark, story. 5 stars.

I loved your Saturday Night Story but didn't like this one at all. Good writing, but I don't like people taking advantage of other people and most of all asshole guys taking advantage of women. I would like the story a lot more of the assholes got busted and were themselves totally humiliated, so there was some justice.

You have 3 stories up on the boards so far and I have just read all 3

The three of them are excellently written and plausible in writing terms if not in r/l terms.

I hope you realise your dream to be published because you can tell a story

5 stars all 3

from Kelteriser@hotmail.com (user ID issues so I have to do anon to start comments)

Well written, the abuse of authority caused my shivers.

Amusing fantasy, well written. But anyone writing on literotica should know that the external genitalia is called 'the vulva', the vagina is internal only. See wikipedia.

Keep up the good work, Jessica.....if this got the worst of the reviews, the others must be stellar!!

I really hope you write the story about the church group girl. I would very much like to read that.

I liked your story, the idea behind it and it was well written. So an enjoyable story. However, I should have seen it coming, but when those two guys turned out to be such arrogant frauds I wasn't happy with that part. I know the girl wasn't hurt by the experience because she had no idea she was being taped. But despite that, I liked, but I hope his supervisor catches him, and Jason!

I have the advantage of having read your later work. You have progressed so far beyond this effort that it seems like they were written by different authors! Congratulations on your many published works. I envy you!

I know it's a story, but definitely not the way to treat women.

Interesting premise, but too short. I give it a 5, screw the negative reviewers.

I was enjoying it until I realized she had been exploited.

Is it too late to ask you to return to this and give us a sequel?

It was clear from the beginning that this was a farce - seems to call for a follow-up

You can do better than this, Jessica…