All Comments on 'Missed Dinner Date'

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Rob ConnerRob Connerover 12 years ago
What a Slut!

Kick her lesbo ass to the curb. First pussy then dick.Cheating is Cheating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good story

need to write some follow-ups to this one

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
OPENING UP A CLOSED MARRIAGE

that was only closed to 1. TK U MLJ LV NV

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 12 years ago
In for a pound, indeed!

I'm thinking Scott is in for some payback. Funny how cheating is cheating until it becomes sharing. I look forward to your next chapter, but don't rush. Quality is worth the wait.

-Ripley--Ripley-over 12 years ago
Wonderful job!

I enjoyed it very much and hope that you continue to write in the lesbian gendre!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Now what?

The story has a good start and middle but how does it end? Do they work it out? Does the marriage? Does it turn into group sex? Does the wife give a shit about the husband other then a meal ticket? Was the baby nothing mote then a marriage insurance policy?

leaves reader hanging so many questions the writer doesn't answer. My suggestion is if the writer is going to write a story complete it don't just write half of the story. Other aspects of the writer's skills are good but lack of ending ruins the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Once a cheating slut always a cheating slut.

She knows she can fuck anything male or female now and she will, the marriage is now open to everyone and anything. Another Cuckold swingers wet dream story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
UGH!!!!

Sick cuckold bullshit! Put a gun to your head!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What a whore

And what a fucking cuck. How was this hot? Having a cheating whore of a wife is not hot at all.

MartyMBMartyMBover 4 years ago
Too much unanswered

Why did Kylie cheat?

Why didn't Scott do something about It?

How did they deal with the discovery?

Did their marriage survive?

Why did Dallia deliberately hurt the marriage, besides the obvious attraction?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
UGH!!!!

Stinks to high heaven!!!!

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