All Comments on 'Missed Offense'

Loved your story, now why can't there be more folks with that don't ask, don't tell attitude? Keep it up and I'll be on lookout for more of your work.

wo0od

Very natural, very romantic, and very common sensed. I am all for social nudity and if it leads to naturalness, so be it. This story was very good. Let's have more like it?

for a first effort. Keep writing.

One word to describe it , I ONLY wish there could be a part # 2 !!

Keep it going....

Will there be balance or consequences in a second episode?

Does Pete screw his wife's friend because of her suit - will either loving spouse know of the infidelities?

Well written - now what?

Couldn't have been better!

I know that you mister writer are probably so wired out of coke or meth that you let little things slip by you. Or perhaps it's your way of letting someones name slip through. It doesn't matter if you call him Shep, Chuckie, or Stupid, ji=uts call him the same ezch time so we can keep up.

I would love more of that.