All Comments on 'Missionary Mother and Me Ch. 01'
by eecoop
- 9 Comments
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoOmg, this is great! Could you not include the mom, let him fuck all the black babes there. Tht would be fucking hot!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoDoes mom show him how to fuck the help, or is this just a come on, Is this a sucker move to keep us coming buck, all show and no go. It's an incest story, NOT A WHITE BOY FUCKS A BLACK GIRL story............
Trilloalmost 10 years agoGreat start, good lead into, near setting and description, and also the potential variables for your story direction. I think a bit more into developing the Dad,Mom relationship-/ son would extend the build up as well as flesh out the story . I like it for its potential and it's lead up
Cheers
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoOMG....what a place to end first chapter....i was at least hoping he'd screw the maid.....no jerk time in first chapter....wrong way to end first chapter....hipe 2 is a lot mire feisty and with lots of jerk time.....please...
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoInteresting concept but desperately needs more development. My rating is based on what your story can be if you put a little more time into it.
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