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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WINNER

The story. Debbie. Warren.

A good idea/plot. That is then carried out superbly, with great dialog.

The plot is probably not new on Literotica (not much is, after thousands of stories ) -- woman waiting on lover is mistaken for scheduled escort(?)/prostitute. But the idea is executed so well. The background on how she became his lover, from being oral-virgin babysitter, which explains why she is where she is when she is. The coincidences of her being dressed fitting for it, and having the same name as his scheduled liaison. The very nicely contrived conversation. And most especially Debbie's love and eagerness for sex. This combined with Warren's respectful, unselfish, skilled loving put the finishing touches to a pleasant verbal painting.

She asks for the phone number Warren had called -- is she quick thinking or what?

Would it be OK to call a slutty tale pretty?

Paul in Oklahoma

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