All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 03'

by JackKeith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep it going

Great story, keep it going.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 19 years ago
Great Story

This is a very good story. I really like the dry humor in it, too. After your opening statement [ch1]I didn't expect any sex until ch6, or later. Seems you were wrong; the sex is very good.

And I am glad you didn't dwell on the debauchery of Wendys.

It's odd how comfortable I feel about him and Alex. I think, maybe, it is just too loving to feel bad.

But it's an interesting story. It seems the whole world has opened up for him since he's free of Wendy.

He may be on Viagra soon, though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A Story Teller Is Born

Very Nice Work - Thanks and in a word(s) - MORE PLEASE

Life is a story - and you tell it well

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent

Best story I have read in many years. Please keep them coming.

JHD123JHD123over 19 years ago
Among the very best

Among the very best of all categories at Literotica. I hope the spirit moves you again soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Best

One of the best stories/series I have read. Not just about the sex, but about the characters. Well done.

kate2112kate2112over 19 years ago
It just gets better...Jack Miller

I agree with another commenter, the characterisations are very believable and the sex is....imaginative

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oh Jack...

I love this whole story, so erotic, so well told - but I adore the way he and Alex come together!

Lukas

David48David48about 18 years ago
lemonade

Jack was married to the ultimate lemon. "Was" that is...Not everyone has a life restart like he did. Hotter than hell story with a liberal dose of real heart. THAT is the way life SHOULD be for all the broken folks out there...

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