All Comments on 'Mistle Family Ch. 02'

by ElizabethBean91

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All aunts and nieces should experience such uninhibited sex.

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 6 years ago

The focus between Chelsea & Mandy was too far into D/s games & I found it harsh & kinda too chauvinistic. I'm not a gentle lesbian by any means but I'd have preferred less manipulation & more seduction. You write really well though & I like how detailed & nuanced your characters are. So far this has been a really great series to read. Still 5 stars!

ElizabethBean91ElizabethBean91almost 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you Alwaystaboo and CliterateDyke. This chapter played out like a game of cat and mouse, with Chelsea dominating Mandy, and then Mandy turning the tables, then Chelsea regained control, then Mandy again. It was definitely harsh at times, but it also provided a good deal of insight into who Mandy is and how she struggles with herself internally; Mandy's internal struggle, being wealthy but lonely, continues to develop in subsequent chapters. Thank you both for your feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series.

SnoopygirlSnoopygirlabout 2 years ago

Mmmm nice story! Thx for sharing.

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My name is Elizabeth Bean, I'm a twenty-eight-year-old college student residing in Michigan. I'm attending college with the goal of becoming a registered nurse; a few more years hopefully, I started college a few years late. I enjoy writing, I sort of took it up a year ago. I'...

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