by ElizabethBean91
All aunts and nieces should experience such uninhibited sex.
The focus between Chelsea & Mandy was too far into D/s games & I found it harsh & kinda too chauvinistic. I'm not a gentle lesbian by any means but I'd have preferred less manipulation & more seduction. You write really well though & I like how detailed & nuanced your characters are. So far this has been a really great series to read. Still 5 stars!
Thank you Alwaystaboo and CliterateDyke. This chapter played out like a game of cat and mouse, with Chelsea dominating Mandy, and then Mandy turning the tables, then Chelsea regained control, then Mandy again. It was definitely harsh at times, but it also provided a good deal of insight into who Mandy is and how she struggles with herself internally; Mandy's internal struggle, being wealthy but lonely, continues to develop in subsequent chapters. Thank you both for your feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series.