All Comments on 'Mistletoe Trigger'

Very impressive. Good expression of the wife's point of view, Dialogue matched only by the descriptive action. Thank you.

once again..as usual on this site..writer has eliminated a husband for cora/john's dad...to be a part of this story...so that instead of the usual..the story would have told us of a hottttt 4some....a hottt family 4some...with besides the usual lez action...cora and wife could have insisted on john and his dad..getting into some hot dad/son bi too...with cora and his wife..why???because as usual...99.9% of time.. writers on this site completely ignore women/moms like myself and real bi couples who find the hottest scenerio of family fun.. is... total family fun...including total bi..and for women/moms...nothing hotter than inclusion of dad/son bi..whether experiencing it..or fantasizing about it..trust us..we know...

This needs some very serious work at redoing, what were some sections written by a 6 year old. Used the common emotional of capital letters then insults the intelligence of the reader by doing this "MMMMMEEEEEEE" kind of grade school type of junk.

Anybody thinks different is a FUCKING MORON! That was one of the best stories I have ever read in a very long time.

I am sitting in the office bored out of my mind reading this with a cock that is dying to bust out of pants. I think my underwear is SOAKED with precum! Good job!!!!

Have to drop by and send in my gratitude to the author for sharing with us such a wonderful story. He (or probably she?) has all my admirations and respects.

One thing in particular I would like to point out, this story certainly doesn't look like written by a six-year-old to me regardless some malicious comment from some anonymous. Rather those who said that, are.

No, I don't think it is a good idea. 3 is just okay.

In China, there is a saying, too much is just as bad as too less. (meaning just right is the best!)

I loved it!Nice build up, great plot!

When I was a kid I would go downtown on the 3rd Thursday of the month so I would be the first to buy Marvel Comics. I check your site everyday for new stories. Damn I was # 7. Great story!!!!!!

Loved the story! Can't wait for your next one.

This is one of the best Mother,Son,& Daughter-in-law, stories I have ever read. I love reading incests tales True or false.The flirtiness between mother & D-i

-l was great tension building, then finally letting the crescendo of passion take over & then the son get's the chance has always wanted ...Too fuck his mom & wife at the same time..... HENCE! An Awesome Christmas Time

...because my cock erupted in my hand as the narrator was snowballing her husband's load out of his mother's mouth. Wheww! Too hot!

I have not read anything so erotic in a long time. I could almost smell the lustiness of the love making between Cora, John and Diana...this story rocks. Thank you for sharing.

Two teachers with a combined income of approx. $130,000 or so can afford only one annual trip? hmmmmmmmm Which of them's pissing the money away? I'm retired with only a $13,000 annual income and I have no problem w/alloting money for such a trip.

This story is hot from the start. I love the build up and all parts. Ignore the idiots comments. Very well written and believable. Thanks and great job! I love the mother in law part, always had those fantasies also...

This was one interesting story. Not one of my favourites among your extensive and high quality works, but I enjoyed it just the same. The situation snowballs rather fast, while I prefer slow build ups, but considering the premise, it was perfectly understable. It was a good read, certainly. Nice work! ^__^

The mistletoe as the trigger was excellent. The buildup was very good, enough to make the payoff better but not so much that you get bored waiting for something to happen. Very good story containing love and happiness with a good ending for all. Much preferable to those about evil deeds and pain. Thanks and write more please!

I M 1 OF YOUR GREATEST FANS...GREAT STORY

PLEASE PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING, KEEP ON THE GOOD WORKS

WITH LOVE

RB

Every man wishes he had a wife and mother like that.I really mean he wishes he "had' both like that.Is there a man alive who hasn't dreamed about having an FMF 3way with wife,getting to watch her eat pussy and having her suck him off with her pussy juice slick mouth.Having it be his mom just added that extra bit of fantasy to this spectacular erotic story.Many men like me would love being sucked off by mom,shooting a huge load into her mouth and then fucking her. I guess you can tell this really turned me on, "Thanks". LT

hottest story i ever read on here, thanks

This story is so good that I've reread it several times.

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and it is w/o a doubt the best mom/son incest tale i have ever run across,,,,and made all the more erotic and yet romantic by the wife's pov,,,,,,well done!!

DID I SAY OUTSTANDING?

I would have given the author a 5 were it not for the fact that it was fiction and some details escaped the true sexual feelings of a woman. Written by a man, I can understand that. Nonetheless, I feel it was well written at a snappy pace and with all the ingredients for a jerk off marathon!!

I enjoyed the story very much, better then 90% of the crap that others write.

I intend to read other stories that you've written and can only hope they are good as this on. And Yes it did turn me on. And the one jerk with his negative comments, 'Fuck him'. What has he written?

I believe this is a classic. I love the story line and my wife and I fantasize about sharing our bed with our mothers. We fuck one of them and then the next time e fuck the other. And, if we really get turn on she fucks min and I get to fuck hers. After being married so many year we use anything to spice up our sex lives.

Fantastic story and you made it sound so real would love a follow up

Omg I loved this story, I have often thought of fucking my mom. The closest I have got is fucking my aunt, she stayed with us when I was 19 for a summer. she heard me and a girl friend one afternoon. When the girl left she came and ask me to do her as she had just gotten divorced. We got it on several times before she left.

Just re-read this for the umpteenth time. Still think it's one of the hottest incest stories on the site. It really is a classic.

The problem I have with this story is I always find myself cumming before I get to page 4. You paint such a vivid picture you really can see this scene in your mind's eye.

I've been reading these incest stories for a

Month or two straight now, and this is by far the hottest

Funnest sexiest most orgasmic one of them all. I adore it.... Well done

Agree with the other comments that this is the sexiest story I've ever read. My underpants were wet with cum from the middle of the story to the end. That's not easy to do to a man soon to be 78 years old.

Your story is one of the most erotic tales I've stumbled across...ever. "Mistletoe Trigger" is so well written that I could have sworn a woman must have been its author. Congrats! I agree. I also can identify with what you said about your personal muse. Mine, the nasty cunt :~} , also appears unbidden, usually at the most inopportune times, and then demands my complete attention or leaves in a huff.

One of the best on the site,

Well Done

loved it. Will John also get mom PG and have a sister or brother.

What a creative way of writing such a high class erotica.

Thanks

Loved it:) would like to read more like this one.

I rarely give 5***** stars, but this one did the trick. Was very turned on through the entire read. Thank you.

Thank you. You made exactly the right mix of slow and steady. Thank you too for avoiding the wham bam type seduction so common to stories these days.

I must make it a point to return and finish off the story one day. Oh, and the reason I couldn't finish the story? I had to finish what you started, and damp panties are a tad uncomfortable...

Wow!! Cudnt finish the story!! Came so hard before I cud finish. It's beyond erotic. Please write more regarding mother in law daughter in law incest.. its so fucking turn on.

Would love to see this made into a movie!

And Diana will teach her son and daughter-in-law how to love. Cora will be a Grandmother and her grandson and grandaughter wil grow up hearing her pleading with John to "Fuck Mommy Hard!". It'll be a complicated houshold, like all homes of incest, but it will be a loving one. I took a nap this afternoon and dreamed of Cora, John, and Diana. Diana large with child and all of them "en flagrante" at the old farmhouse. Diana, even in her pregnancy or because of it I don't know, having to keep horny teens at arms length while she wears the barely allowable tops and skirts that her lusty mother in law buys for her. I think the old four poster bed will get lots of practice, and lots of results. Lots of conceptions and lots of loveing. Good story.

...this story would need to come with a smoke detector.

;)

One of the ultimate taboo threesomes...so well described!

As a frequent reader of mother-son stories, I must say this is the best yet !

I would've given it 5 stars if you hadn't mentioned it as a religious experience, that was uncalled for.

ch 2 mom gets pregnant?

Awesome story so hot to read I really lover it.

composed and written with style and heat and sensitivity. Just marvelous!

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This is an outstanding story, I loved it. Is there another chapter? I hope?!

How can a story that is so warm, fun, sexy and real, also be the story of lust and incest, it’s because of the fabulously created characters, totally believable, loveable and sensitive.

The perfect blend of what erotic writing should be. Love, love, loved it.

Wow! That about sums it up for me. I loved this story. It had love, it had emotion, it had amazingly hot sex and it had a happily every after. That ticks all the right boxes for me. This is probably in my top 5 stories that I've read here. I don't think there needs to be a Chapter 2, as this was done in such a good way it doesnt need it. (Though I wouldn't hate it if there was one). Good job on this!

Ohhh how I wished the mother was pregnant tooo

Wow! What a wonderful love story, it is without doubt the best Christmas story I have read, so erotic and sexy and the charactors were so real....this story is among the best and very well written and told...............():\

Absolute perfection! I will give it 10 stars if I could. The sexual tension was palpable, such a unique perspective from a daughter-in-law. I loved her mom became a babbling slut at one point and they returned to an almost religious experience. All of the best things of a mom son incest relationship in one.

Amazing story. Added to my faves xx

I love this so much that I read it every year at Christmas time! 5+++ stars!

ALL CAPS shouting is annoying af.

It is a captivating and exciting story keep up the Ggggrrrreeeeaaaattttt work

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That is the greatest story I have ever read on Literotica.

Fantastic story. As one who loved my beautiful, redheaded Mother more than I was ever able to show her, VERY well done.

Thank you, that was so good!

That was fucking fantastic!!

Great story, really liked it

I didn’t get half way through before I came. Thank you. I look forward to cumming during the second half.

That’s my purpose for writing. I hope people cum while reading my contributions.